Wednesday, January 9, 2008

1/9/08 9th

Late start today--short classes.

We spent our 35 minutes doing peer evaluations on our first drafts of our persuasive papers. If you missed today, please have a parent or sibling help you to evaluate your draft so you can effectively revise and edit. Your helper should read your paper, then highlight the following:

  • thesis statement (or your stance on the issue)
  • three arguments in introduction
  • main argument in each paragraph of the body
  • supporting evidence for each argument
  • restatement of thesis in conclusion
  • restatement of three arguments in conclusion

Your helper should also indicate whether each argument is a logical argument or emotional argument. Remember, you are not allowed to use "It's a free country," or "Everybody knows" as an argument.

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