We spent our 35 minutes doing peer evaluations on our first drafts of our persuasive papers. If you missed today, please have a parent or sibling help you to evaluate your draft so you can effectively revise and edit. Your helper should read your paper, then highlight the following:
- thesis statement (or your stance on the issue)
- three arguments in introduction
- main argument in each paragraph of the body
- supporting evidence for each argument
- restatement of thesis in conclusion
- restatement of three arguments in conclusion
Your helper should also indicate whether each argument is a logical argument or emotional argument. Remember, you are not allowed to use "It's a free country," or "Everybody knows" as an argument.
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