Tuesday, August 26, 2008

8/26/08

Here's what we did today:

Journals
There is a specific format I would like to you follow when making journal entries. I would like to you write the date at the top of the entry. On the very next line you should respond to the prompt on the white board. To receive full credit, you should write from margin to margin (the red lines on the sides of the paper) from the first hole to the second hole. This is one half of the page. I require a half page entry for all prompts. You may start the next entry at the half-way mark (the second hole) of the paper. If you have written more than a half page on the previous entry, turn the page and start your next entry at the top of the paper. You may write on the fronts and backs of your paper. If a journal entry I require is shorter than a half page (DLAs), you should skip to the half-way mark to start your next entry. I only want entries to start at the tops and middles of your paper.

If you are absent on a journal day (Tuesdays and Thursdays), you should make up the journal entry by writing a half page about any topic you choose. Journal entries will be worth five points each. That means 24 entries will be worth 120 by the time we finish the trimester. Please keep up with your journal entries. It is far easier to keep up than to catch up.

Tuesday Teaser
I read a Tuesday Teaser from No More Dead Dogs by Gordan Korman today. I will be reading a few pages from books of different genres most Tuesdays. Your job is to listen and consider whether you'd enjoy trying a book from that genre.

The Writing Process
We continued our work with our writing assignment, following the steps of The Writing Process. We finished our prewriting yesterday, so today we progressed to the second step--drafting. Drafting is organizing your ideas into sentences and paragraphs. The first draft is not supposed to be perfect. It is supposed to be something you will rework to make better. We we draft, the best thing to do is to write as many of your ideas as you can into sentences as quickly as you can. When all your sentences are written, it is time to move on to the next step--revising.

To revise, you should look closely at what you have written and make changes to your draft to make it better. Look at the ideas. Do they flow, one to another? Do your sentences make sense? Do you need to add details to clarify your ideas? To you need to take out some unnecessary details? These are the questions you should ask yourself during the revision step of The Writing Process.

Today we traded our paragraphs with our partners, and we helped each other revise. The job of the partner was to write some notes on the paragraph to help the writer improve his/her work. We had enough time to read each others' paragraphs, but we didn't have enough time to finish the revision step of The Writing Process. We will continue with this project on Thursday.

Coming Attraction
Tomorrow we will be in the computer lab doing reading inventories. We will also have some time in the library for checking out a good reading book. We will probably have some time to read tomorrow. Our regular reading time will begin the first fifteen minutes of class on Friday.

Thanks for another great day!